Try to keep the flashlight as subtle as you can (ie the 2nd photo from the bottom of the first series is the best in terms of lighting, because it is so much softer then the others). I like the backlit images (the second grouping from the top) but I am concerned about the flashlight directed in your model's face. The windowsil images may be a little dark? (or maybe not) . Is there a reason that one of the photos in the series is in black and white? That will stand out when you are displaying them as a whole.
El. i like the black and white ones in the basement, maybe if you used more contrast, and wouldnt have used the flash, but a long exposure it would look differently. The only ones i dont really get is afraid of change. I just see a girl holding her doll. i dont see what change shes "afraid of." but other then that. some suggestions would be, put your tripod, or keep your camera at the same angle, or place, and just have your subject move(like in the stair ones). it gives me a feeling of like motion sickness. its really busy. with all the moving around of angles and stuff. But awesome! are you going to end up fixing them? oh and something else you could consider is taking the strongest pictures (use 3 pictures) insted of 5, or so. for the first ones.
great theme choice! and good symbolism behind each picture, i like your lighting teqniques (oops bad speller!) but watch the flashlight it washes out her face on a few of the pictures, nicely done!
The third picture of morgan laying down lookng into the mirror I like a lot. I like the reflections and the lighting. The next photo I like is the one with morgan standing in the middle of the frame, and it is really lit up. It kind of makes you wonder what shes "reaching for" haha. good job.
I really like your photos. the only one i don't really understand is the first one, where change is inevitable i think? in my opinion, i don't get how the photo relates to the topic. Otherwise I think your lighting looks good. I agree with jordan too, about how your going to put it together. otherwise good work!
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i like your theme.
but maybe think about changing your "fear of change"
it's kind of hard to understand the concept of that one.
otherwise good job :]
as taylor said, if you were to change your "fear of change" one, I would pay close attention to the lighting of the photo!
good themes though
Try to keep the flashlight as subtle as you can (ie the 2nd photo from the bottom of the first series is the best in terms of lighting, because it is so much softer then the others).
I like the backlit images (the second grouping from the top) but I am concerned about the flashlight directed in your model's face.
The windowsil images may be a little dark? (or maybe not) .
Is there a reason that one of the photos in the series is in black and white? That will stand out when you are displaying them as a whole.
El. i like the black and white ones in the basement, maybe if you used more contrast, and wouldnt have used the flash, but a long exposure it would look differently.
The only ones i dont really get is afraid of change. I just see a girl holding her doll. i dont see what change shes "afraid of." but other then that.
some suggestions would be, put your tripod, or keep your camera at the same angle, or place, and just have your subject move(like in the stair ones). it gives me a feeling of like motion sickness. its really busy. with all the moving around of angles and stuff.
But awesome! are you going to end up fixing them?
oh and something else you could consider is taking the strongest pictures (use 3 pictures) insted of 5, or so. for the first ones.
great theme choice! and good symbolism behind each picture, i like your lighting teqniques (oops bad speller!) but watch the flashlight it washes out her face on a few of the pictures, nicely done!
i think you have a good theme going.
im just woundering how your planning on having it look as a final.
because im lost on what its gonna be.
but i like the lighting in the picutres, it helps to draw me in!!
The third picture of morgan laying down lookng into the mirror I like a lot. I like the reflections and the lighting. The next photo I like is the one with morgan standing in the middle of the frame, and it is really lit up. It kind of makes you wonder what shes "reaching for" haha. good job.
I really like your photos. the only one i don't really understand is the first one, where change is inevitable i think? in my opinion, i don't get how the photo relates to the topic. Otherwise I think your lighting looks good. I agree with jordan too, about how your going to put it together. otherwise good work!
I like your theme, but i would choose either color or black and white. good start so far!
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